Let's start this.First of all, your writing quality is good, the world background is decent, the updating stability is nice.And then we get to the character design. MC was a good character through and through until the latest chapters (25 to current). Your MC became worser than Hajime, might be better to compare him to a ded dove on the streets.He becomes a bad edge Lord.
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LIKEDepraved_Chap:That’s harsh. I’ve read a bit of your Arifureta fic btw. Is the teacher’s personality on the [Neutral Good] Spectrum?