Review Detail of Bisabing in Avatar harem x male reader
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The idea of the story is interesting and that the reader himself is the main character makes it even better. Although I fail everytime to place my name in the space. I hope you will continue with the same quality and creativity of the story
Avatar harem x male reader
Noahkiller05
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Noahkiller05:It take a bit to get used to the y/n aka your name. Hopefully not to long and now that I think about it. There is no male reader self inserted on this app. I also hop to continue with the pace as well.
faeeeee:My brain just auto corrects it to Yin and I use that as the mc's name.
I always found these types of stories to be very weird, even more so when the main character says or does something I wouldn't. Which kinda defeats the whole purpose of it yknow? Using that other reviewer's idea of 'Yin' would probably make it easier for me
Noahkiller05:Haha now that interesting I mean the name can be anything. But it more suppost to be you
I can understand that it mostly like be action that you would not do but this story is supposed to be a story. It not supposed to full on you but it can be anyone you want it to be but I went with y/n because I want you guy to feel like you are the ch aracter
FinnsRevenge:I always found these types of stories to be very weird, even more so when the main character says or does something I wouldn't. Which kinda defeats the whole purpose of it yknow? Using that other reviewer's idea of 'Yin' would probably make it easier for me
You want the readers to feel like the mc but the mc isn't fully the reader but is actually the author since its what he'd do?
Noahkiller05:I can understand that it mostly like be action that you would not do but this story is supposed to be a story. It not supposed to full on you but it can be anyone you want it to be but I went with y/n because I want you guy to feel like you are the ch aracter
Hmm I mean the Mc is doing something that I would not do as well. How I made the Mc was with a couple of idea of what he will be like. I mean It has definitely changed sine I made the story originally he was going to be more Sarcastic and not real caring about the characters. But I see what you mean by what you said.
FinnsRevenge:You want the readers to feel like the mc but the mc isn't fully the reader but is actually the author since its what he'd do?image
Noahkiller05:It take a bit to get used to the y/n aka your name. Hopefully not to long and now that I think about it. There is no male reader self inserted on this app. I also hop to continue with the pace as well.
The whole concept of makeing the Main characters name Y/N is actually a flawed concept in that just because there name is Y/N doesn't change anything other then makeing them harder to differentiate between the million other self insert stories along with the fact that it's harder to relate to or insert yourself into a character that basically doesn't have a name sure the reader can give them a name but 9 times out fo 10 that character isn't gonna act the same as themselves so when the character doesn't do something they would that immediately pulls them out of the story itself ruining their immersion and defeating the entire purpose of the author nameing them Y/N so all in all it's better if the author just gave the character a name instead and focused more on the story unless he plans on just making the character an everyman or wants to right his own insert
Noahkiller05:I can understand that it mostly like be action that you would not do but this story is supposed to be a story. It not supposed to full on you but it can be anyone you want it to be but I went with y/n because I want you guy to feel like you are the ch aracter
Big_Horny_Energy:The whole concept of makeing the Main characters name Y/N is actually a flawed concept in that just because there name is Y/N doesn't change anything other then makeing them harder to differentiate between the million other self insert stories along with the fact that it's harder to relate to or insert yourself into a character that basically doesn't have a name sure the reader can give them a name but 9 times out fo 10 that character isn't gonna act the same as themselves so when the character doesn't do something they would that immediately pulls them out of the story itself ruining their immersion and defeating the entire purpose of the author nameing them Y/N so all in all it's better if the author just gave the character a name instead and focused more on the story unless he plans on just making the character an everyman or wants to right his own insert
True very true but like I said it can be anything you want and because I can’t make any good names. But just want to state it meant to be a story. But hay it is what it is
Big_Horny_Energy:The whole concept of makeing the Main characters name Y/N is actually a flawed concept in that just because there name is Y/N doesn't change anything other then makeing them harder to differentiate between the million other self insert stories along with the fact that it's harder to relate to or insert yourself into a character that basically doesn't have a name sure the reader can give them a name but 9 times out fo 10 that character isn't gonna act the same as themselves so when the character doesn't do something they would that immediately pulls them out of the story itself ruining their immersion and defeating the entire purpose of the author nameing them Y/N so all in all it's better if the author just gave the character a name instead and focused more on the story unless he plans on just making the character an everyman or wants to right his own insert
Noahkiller05:True very true but like I said it can be anything you want and because I can’t make any good names. But just want to state it meant to be a story. But hay it is what it is
Big_Horny_Energy:just load up an random name generator or name him something generic like Bob, Jeff, or George
The_reader_ofnovel:Does the ntr happen to mc repeatedly or is it only in the beginning?