Review Detail of hero4hire in Naruto: immortal Ninja
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5 yr old orphan commoner mc with no cheat learn sage jutsu in his bedroom with his supposed cannon knowledge. if you can deal with thus kind of logc then you can try giving this a try.
Naruto: immortal Ninja
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Well, it's your opinion, and I respect it. I just wanted to thank you for bringing it to my attention. That was a mistake from my draft because I write for myself to understand, and then I elaborate. I didn't notice it before, but I have fixed it now. Again, thank you. If you hadn't said anything, it could have caused problems in the future because he wasn't supposed to learn Sage at that age.