Review Detail of Agent_047 in Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
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Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
Agent_047
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lemme give you my opinion.The first few chaps are illogical. You mentioned he used Plagiarism software, all the software will have a files stored after checking the paper, so he can show it and prove it. Next, all universities will require a Turnitin report before submitting their thesis, so another blunder. If the paper is plagiarized, and the author didn't know that and even the software didn't know it, it's not his mistake at all. The case would be immediately won in court.Next, what kind of logic is hiring two passed out students as CEOs for a multibillion corporation I get it that they are his friends and trusted but it's still not logical for me. Next, in one of the chapters, mc explains everything to his friends, so is it even required to be that detailed ? You can just write it as, the mc explained everything to his friends but omitted this and this part and altered his story here a bit and be done with it. The way you described everything is not quality writing, it's like you wanna fill up some chapter pages. I do get it that you are new writer, but I hope you won't make such mistakes in the future. Honestly, compared to the first few chaps, the improvement in your writing can be seen clearly.
It is the norm to ask that question and usually reader don't like it when they don't know if it is or isn't har*m. Just a heads up since there will be angry/uninterested readers if you don't clarify.
Agent_047:haven't decided yet. Thats why I didn't put the tagimage
FallenAngeI:It is the norm to ask that question and usually reader don't like it when they don't know if it is or isn't har*m. Just a heads up since there will be angry/uninterested readers if you don't clarify.
well most of the people know him as the guy who got lucky and made a good security app. Nothing else about him is known to most of the people. His company despite being a billion dollar company has only released two products, BugZapper and GAIA OS. SO, most people just consider him a dude who got lucky twice.
Noblesseking:Isn't he a bit too open.....like how can a person suddenly become all so powerfull...
I feel like in the real world being lucky is also a skill in business it doesn’ mean everyone should look down on him just cause only be he made two pro ducts
Agent_047:well most of the people know him as the guy who got lucky and made a good security app. Nothing else about him is known to most of the people. His company despite being a billion dollar company has only released two products, BugZapper and GAIA OS. SO, most people just consider him a dude who got lucky twice.
Still....consequence of that can be quite horrible....a company like fb,insta,google would have silenced him to get program for themselves...if it was in real
Agent_047:well most of the people know him as the guy who got lucky and made a good security app. Nothing else about him is known to most of the people. His company despite being a billion dollar company has only released two products, BugZapper and GAIA OS. SO, most people just consider him a dude who got lucky twice.
don't do it like that if you are going to make it 2 then just make it a full harem bcz those who don't like it harem don't want more than a single love interest so if you are going to say it's not harem then there should not be more than 1 love interest.
Agent_047:No. At max two and that is dependant
That's why I said it is dependent because there is one character that I'm stuck on whether to have as a love interest or not.
its_L:don't do it like that if you are going to make it 2 then just make it a full harem bcz those who don't like it harem don't want more than a single love interest so if you are going to say it's not harem then there should not be more than 1 love interest.
