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Review Detail of CarsonRome_432 in Becoming the Strongest through Idling

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I'm not a grammar freak so writing quality is OK. And excellent story at the start. If the author had taken some inspiration from Cultivation online, then I dare say this novel would have been awesome. But I lost interest for a lot of reasons. Mc is dumb, stupid, hypocritical, naive, wasteful. No world building. No goal for the MC No drama or suspense Unless the author wrote this book nonchalantly, then in my opinion he is a terrible writer. Jai! Another potentially good novel ruined at the authors hands. How sad

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Becoming the Strongest through Idling

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