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D_Wolf
D_WolfLv111mthD_Wolf

Meh, not all that good of a story so far. The pluses for this story is the concept of the MC character unknowingly being on the moon and building a massive moon-base and fortifying it against alien attack. Only when some alien's land and are captured does he find out that the alien's are from Earth, and he is on Earth's moon. The author tries to make it more of a serious story but the interplay and the problem's associated with moon missions create a fairly dull and confusing story. The AI characters are also somewhat silly. Why did the one expose himself so easily by capturing the first set of astronauts? At least observe, document, and report to the MC.

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People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1Santy_Melay

How do you not realize that you are on Earth's moon if you see it from there.

Tolgasah
TolgasahLv11Tolgasah

I mean we don't see the dark side of the moon, ever, from earth, you can google it its pretty cool. But I agree that the whole gimmick is pretty dumb that you can't enjoy. ain't no way he didn't intercept any signals and such going to space from earth

Santy_Melay:How do you not realize that you are on Earth's moon if you see it from there.
Deeznuts69_
Deeznuts69_Lv4Deeznuts69_

well it was a robot designed for gathering, if it patrolled for 6 years and suddenly found a new 'resource' then it would likely immediately collect it.