okay first of all the mc feels like a dweeb cosplayer chūnibyō monk wannabe but knows nothing about monks and buddhism and is just introduced to monks due to Ichibe. now reading this made me cringe everytime he introduce himself but otherwise it the writing quality is good aside from later chapters (16-22) that feels a little bit rushed specially chapter 20-22. the author should really omit the words "-I'm the monk- that called names" but he should instead refer himself as "this monk" as this one projects humility while the original one projects arrogance and not confidence. the mc is not Ichibe Hyusobe. if the author really likes to add Ichibe's epithet then use "This monk (1) is the monk who calls the real name" this way it will be more natural or add the word "epithet" on number 1 in between the "monk" and "is". this changes the way the mc introduce himself greatly he won't be perceived by the readers as a chuni who is cosplaying as a monk but a real monk.
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