Review Detail of UelUel in We Judge And The Chaos Begins

I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.