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its quite clear that the writer is amateur and write his MC based on wish fulfillment. like normal human being, the MC kind and samaritan to everyone else to a fault. its like good man giving money to beggar but instead of money he giving out power. very naive like high school boy. well he is still better human than issei ig. also the author dont know proper english of some indonesian terms like 'dukun' which is untranslated indonesian language. in case anyone wondering, dukun in english is shaman or witch doctor. anyway overall the fic is mid. not good but not awful either. it's boring tho

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The Laziest System: Sign-Up System

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