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Raylen2222_Hunt
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I'll give this book 3 stars for all I want in a story. at first it was going good, but after it started going downhill. for the title lazy system it really doesn't apply to me since the host or Mc is doing this work left and right like his fight with the Evil dragon was good but could have been better and should have focused on training like I don't know a training montage because if the guy wants to be with Yasaka he need strength and power I feel like people forget this when writing story about DxD that might makes right.the other stuff is fine but needs more work. as for the sharing or telling people his powers I get its good to be honest on some stuff but I felt like he should have kept most of his power and magic a secret like his Dragon slayer magic or his Universal breathing techniques. since what's the point on having trump cards when you show them left and right like it's a piece of candy. theirs so many threats on DxD that I don't know why the Mc/Author forgot or not just mention it like his he stupid or wants to be killed. the world has beings that can destroy countries or the world and his out their playing school boy plus his human still is he? going to turn into a Dragon or what will his race be since if the man is going to get together with Yasaka who can live for as long as she wants the man needs to turn into something that has long life span. I get the Sage mode or arts will give him a long life but for how long? exactly it's a good story but he needs process, and theirs this hint of naivety that I don't like about stories the guy knows his in a dangerous world but doesn't improve him self more and get that needed strength so he can be lazy.sigh sorry about tye ranting all and all it is a good story needs work here and there but yeah so keep up the good work

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