Review Detail of Daoist_Dan in *Re-writing* NARUTO: DUAL KAMUI in a cultivation world

A slow but fun enough story. It has a good concept. A chakra user in a cultivation world. Also it had a fun twist I didn't see coming. One that showed the mc isn't a generic robot mc who can quickly move on from anything. The world and bestiary are interesting too. The only problem I had with it was some moments I noticed didn't add entertainment value. Plus they didn't spiral into anything interesting. Adding summarization to the writer's toolbox would be a good thing imo.