Review Detail of memberberry in *Re-writing* NARUTO: DUAL KAMUI in a cultivation world
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the story is a mess, 11 chapters and several "cool" powers. mc meets a stranger in the woods and abracadabra we are best friends. I wasn't going to waste my time any further, but since I didn't see any reviews written by an adult, I decided to do other readers like me a favor.
*Re-writing* NARUTO: DUAL KAMUI in a cultivation world
Rgendamushrooms123
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a real adult doesn't form his opinions after reading 2 to 3 chapters. The plot makes sense as the story progresses, the "mess" u refer to isn't a mess if you read further. Don't make fun of others reviews just because u got a short attention span of a goldfish. U should stick to your face slapping wuxia novel.
Well if the first few chapters can't capture your attention, then it's the fault of the author. Listen, people have better things to do than to waste time because a fan Fic MIGHT get better in the future, and those who don't at least have better options to read.
Rgendamushrooms123:a real adult doesn't form his opinions after reading 2 to 3 chapters. The plot makes sense as the story progresses, the "mess" u refer to isn't a mess if you read further. Don't make fun of others reviews just because u got a short attention span of a goldfish. U should stick to your face slapping wuxia novel.
I suggest you to atleast attempt to "read " the room before giving your comment. I am not begging him to read my novel, I am saying he is the one being immature for calling my other readers as little brats just because he didn't like my work. If you don't like it then don't read it, who is forcing you? just don't insult other based on your own narrow outlooks. Try to have some commons sense or are you as clueless as this in the real world?
iwantyouinmyswamp:Well if the first few chapters can't capture your attention, then it's the fault of the author. Listen, people have better things to do than to waste time because a fan Fic MIGHT get better in the future, and those who don't at least have better options to read.
What a narrow outlook, don't insult others. After reading the first half I wanted to agree but now I can't, you seem like a very unlikable person.
Rgendamushrooms123:I suggest you to atleast attempt to "read " the room before giving your comment. I am not begging him to read my novel, I am saying he is the one being immature for calling my other readers as little brats just because he didn't like my work. If you don't like it then don't read it, who is forcing you? just don't insult other based on your own narrow outlooks. Try to have some commons sense or are you as clueless as this in the real world?
iwantyouinmyswamp:What a narrow outlook, don't insult others. After reading the first half I wanted to agree but now I can't, you seem like a very unlikable person.
I was not insulting you but stating the obvious truth. he said that my novel is bad and whoever likes it is a immature kid. I said don't insult others just because you don't like my work. don't read it if you like. You interjected with "He doesn't have to read it if he likes" as if I am forcing him and saying my novel is bad because it fails to captivate him. if you are not a clueless person then what are you? intersecting in an argument without even understanding what the argument is about isn't a trait of a wise person. On top of that your bias reply without even understanding my point which you admitted yourself.
iwantyouinmyswamp:What a narrow outlook, don't insult others. After reading the first half I wanted to agree but now I can't, you seem like a very unlikable person.
iwantyouinmyswamp:All my replays are error so I guess that's that.