The start is okay but I do strongly dislike when the system kind of has a mind of its own and is rude, for example; In this novel, when the MC gets the system, the system keeps calling him "stupid" or "idiot". Although the MC isn't exactly smart, the system shouldn't have that big of an opinion that it needs to constantly voice how stipid he is and just explain it instead.
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