Review Detail of Vee_High in Night Eagle
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The book is actually better than I expected, the start has a fine captivating sense to make people stay and world build is good. But the conversations are too long as times with no directory towards the speaker, makes it hard are times to follow through. You can try adding the names of characters at every two or three lines . overall, the book is good .
Night Eagle
Misan Akuya
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This isn’ a YA novel or light novel. I‘d love some constructive criticism but you sound like a hater.
Misan_Akuya:Hey, if you want to make sure where the conversations are going and what charac is speaking perhaps pay attention
Wow wow! chill bro. I'm not hating or anything , your book is good and I said that. I'm only talking about when I got lost during their first quarrel where an expressionless face appeared and the next word was still aggressive and I didn't know if it was the owl at the start of the book or the one who assumed human form earlier
Misan_Akuya:This isn’ a YA novel or light novel. I‘d love some constructive criticism but you sound like a hater.
I actually gave an advice there. You could add the name of the speaking character with their expressions or though every 4 to 5 lines
Misan_Akuya:This isn’ a YA novel or light novel. I‘d love some constructive criticism but you sound like a hater.