Review Detail of Gilgil in Douluo With Multiverse Group Chat

The premise is fun but the author's lack of experience and the rush to unfold the story takes away the introspection of the MC and his unusual situation, there is no interaction with the characters around him and goes straight to the system, how they reacted to the appearance of the system it was too abrupt and forced generating a bit of discomfort, with that the chapters are too short and with little information, the story was rushed and without immersion with the MC or the situation in which he finds himself.