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good writing quality. story development is also good but there are some plot mistakes, like for example sinister six were captured and were imprisoned in magic prison but after few chapters there were some member of sinister six loose on the street and dr octopus also killed Gwen's father. I am not sure if author explained on how sinister six got free from magic prison as I listen to the book while working so it could be possible that somehow they were set free but to me it does not make any sense as none sinister six can do magic so how they escaped. author has romance tag but I havens seen any romance since ch 50 so far. there was one date with Natasha but after that author have not made any progress. so until ch 50 I liked the novel somewhat but it was getting boring personally for me as the MC is somewhat beta MC and is not telling anyone that he knows something about future(can say that he can somewhat know little future to avoide other heros suspicion) but no our MC doesn't do that and always behaves as sidekick of the other heros. so all of this is my opinion so Atleast give this fanfic some try as some of other readers might like it. Good luck to the author.

Inside the Multiverse (Marvel and DC)

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