Has great potential. Pretty good. Nice start there seems no to less grammatical errors. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
fake_lion
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LIKEI have had to do a couple of re reads but honestly its not that bad . Thanks author for the hard work and am loving it so far.
Eins_Mensch:Your review says enough about your knowledge of grammar and by extension, your ability to find and interpret/see them as such.
The plot isnt that bad, but the grammar is rough atleast for the older chps, the new ones look good.
Arcane_mystic4RT5:I have had to do a couple of re reads but honestly its not that bad . Thanks author for the hard work and am loving it so far.