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Carol_Deal
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I love the idea of a deaf main character. Iris and her predicament are intriguing. The story does need some editing and a proofreader, which I'd be happy to help with if you're interested.

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The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

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13Blackdog
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Definitely editing. It's such a brilliant storyline but the grammatical issues are very distracting.