This honestly feels like a translation however even if it is the english is fantastic and without errors just has a chinese feel to it with the systems. Story wise its to early to say anything concrete but its good.
Shadow_Astro
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LIKEThats fine the systems give a the chinese feel not your writing so it just tends to clash in my head lol.
Shadow_Astro:no this is neither a translation nor am I Chinese yes english isn't my first language but not Chinese either
Left_Nut_Of_Madara:Thats fine the systems give a the chinese feel not your writing so it just tends to clash in my head lol.