Review Detail of UnsealingEmptiness in Janitor In A Yandere World
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I want to thank everyone who has read this book. Please excuse me if this book doesn't meet your standards; I'm working to get better at writing.And if it's feasible, please all provide your frank evaluations.
Janitor In A Yandere World
UnsealingEmptiness
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Oh, it refers to a story featuring more than one protagonist. Numerous individuals that have an impact on the plot rather than just one are at the centre of this story.The synopsis will also need to be changed because it isn't very strong.
AbyssalHunger:If I may ask, what does the tag mean by multiple leads
UnsealingEmptiness:Oh, it refers to a story featuring more than one protagonist. Numerous individuals that have an impact on the plot rather than just one are at the centre of this story.The synopsis will also need to be changed because it isn't very strong.
It’s a great story so far with variety but I’m just not a fan of multiple leads but instead a singular one to connect too. I’m sure many readers will be attracted to this novel tho
UnsealingEmptiness:Oh, it refers to a story featuring more than one protagonist. Numerous individuals that have an impact on the plot rather than just one are at the centre of this story.The synopsis will also need to be changed because it isn't very strong.
I see. You can always have a favourite character, identify with him or her, and make comparisons with other characters, even in stories with several protagonists.
AbyssalHunger:It’s a great story so far with variety but I’m just not a fan of multiple leads but instead a singular one to connect too. I’m sure many readers will be attracted to this novel thoimage
UnsealingEmptiness:I see. You can always have a favourite character, identify with him or her, and make comparisons with other characters, even in stories with several protagonists.
Updates are often made on a daily basis, however this week I've been too busy to update. I'm working on Chapter 14 right now.
Hello_Hi_Goodbye:What is the update rate?
UnsealingEmptiness:Updates are often made on a daily basis, however this week I've been too busy to update. I'm working on Chapter 14 right now.
No, it's multiple leads rather than multiple points of view. Because of a few other things I set up, of course, we have been seeing Narvi a lot. Until his time comes, his involvement will be minimised in a few subsequent chapters.
Bluehatduck:We seem to be following Narvi the most, though. So is it more like multiple POVs then leads?
UnsealingEmptiness:No, it's multiple leads rather than multiple points of view. Because of a few other things I set up, of course, we have been seeing Narvi a lot. Until his time comes, his involvement will be minimised in a few subsequent chapters.
Alright here we go, uhh I guess if I were to have a character I would want them to be someone who is very aware of their surroundings, respectful, reasonable, and finally willing and capable of defending themselves. Someone who would make a good knight. Not too close or friendly with anyone, but down to earth.Do with that as you will, I hold no illusions that he will be as I described so do what you have to in order to continue making a good story.
I will be waiting for your review. Volume one will end at Chapter 30, which is Chapter 31 (you know, because auxiliary counts count a chapter; otherwise, volume 1 would have ended at Chapter 30).
Blue_Robin:Also I will re-read and post a review at thirty chapters so expect that.
UnsealingEmptiness:I will be waiting for your review. Volume one will end at Chapter 30, which is Chapter 31 (you know, because auxiliary counts count a chapter; otherwise, volume 1 would have ended at Chapter 30).