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Review Detail of animelover1477 in I Told You To Manage The Reserve Unit For Me Instead Of Turning It Into A Special Troop

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read over 500 ch+ **spoliers** and a rant. so I like military novels which probably honestly what kept me on the this book for so long because it has a lot of cons. still don't understand the premise that mc transmigrates into different world, and he had been in the body for 5 yrs before the start, and then there is a mention of a movie that has the members of battle wolf which is suppse to help with some foreshadowing. and when mc meets the characters he slips up by recognizes their face , he c9vers it up but after that and normal interaction there is no need for this back story. because mc has an op system. now the system was at the for front at the first few arcs building his strength and spoilers but at some point it was at the back, and mc is honestly to op. the system help him gain his strength and useful items and his cheats like his radar but if I the situations it makes no sense. for example the meteorite and he uses system to get glue protector and mc doesn't really have a back story of being smart or research but still explain he created it. when he return the military he to hand it over he leave and comes back with a bucket of the "glue" he made . FROM WHERE his base has moved ,logically it has holes. his cheats has holes, his items has holes. the other con is this is too patriotic with a heavy stance of others. now I get the patriotism but if you read some novels you get the undertones but when a book is to heavy on it ,....it's harder read. another con is repetitive lines like in 3 chps you would of had the mc in a conversation with a side character and scene is the same but he repeats the same thing. it's hard to explain but once you read the book you may understand what I getting at [hospital scene with brother family]"we will complete the mission " "if you say that again you don't take me as family" " brothers this brother's that"(and I get the context of brothers mean but in dialogue it's a repetitive dialogue) another con is side characters lack substance his love intrest childhood friend , relationship progression is weird, he goes from turning her down since he never felt love on both lives, she stops him with a kiss, she runs to her house, they don't have words but next day suddenly they confirm their relationship. they get married but honestly no fluff, and there is a hidden tone that his female captain other person from the "movie about battle wolf long ...] supose to like another member of battle wolf but it has connotations she lowkey developed feelings the way she worries about him is annoying after not liking him in the beginning, and since mc mentions her supposed love interest there is no information about that in his present timeline since he took over and we are 500chps in. after all the chps I read the arc are becoming relative aroun d battle wolf, the soliders rely too heavy of mc, female captain doesn't fight,mc doesn't all the planning and training. long rant but I'm getting bored and you can't say I didn't give it a try a binge until 500ch+.

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