Review Detail of RealRomanLord in Ruthless Love.
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The novel has some grammar mistakes but the rest is quit good. Just a little advice. if you could break the big paragraphs into multiple ones, then it would really become easy on the eyes of readers.
Ruthless Love.
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Thank you so much for your review! I intend to run the entire work through for grammar mistakes again, once it's finished, but if you could give me an example, I'll go correct it right away. :) The different parts have been split up into smaller paragraphs several times, but I do understand that if you're reading it on a phone, it will seem heavier. Thank you again.