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Nostalgia_cat
Nostalgia_catLv21yrNostalgia_cat

Very interesting plot. The writing had little grammar but most importantly, the format could be worked on a little. There are large paragraphs that could've been broken into four or five. The reading flowed very well and easy to read. I noticed a lot of the times, the narration is telling too much instead of showing but no big deal. I like how the tone is perfect. It's mysterious and dark with a tad of humor. All the characters were also very developed. Overall, this novel had a really strong potential.

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Ruthless Love.

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Lilliana_Wolfe
Lilliana_WolfeLv11Lilliana_Wolfe

Thank you so much for your feedback! <3 I have focused more on sectioning, conversations and showing in the later chapters, as it seems most people prefer stories to be set up like that. The first chapters haven't been completely edited (were made in 2014) but I will do so, once I have released the remaining chapters. I would love to know later on, if you think it made a difference. Thank you <3