Review Detail of Pandamonium_ in Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

Generally pretty enjoyable enough so that I paid for extra chapters. However I feel that the story and character falls to the wayside and becomes far less fleshed out when the relationship is introduced. It feels rushed like the author is trying to buff Hypnos’ partner to try and make her relative to him and likeable when we haven’t even grown attached enough to Hypnos himself by that point. It’s well written and definitely draws on some great imagery but overall I’m less into it as it feels forced to get the story to a point the author wants to write about. That being said I still did give the author my money so…