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Review Detail of Stire in Village Head's Debauchery

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For a smut book, there is a surprising quality to it! I don’t usually read these books, but seeing as it was particularly high in the charts I decided to give it a try. Although the book falls in line to the standards of such a plot line (every single woman is fair game), the quality of writing and shockingly deep world building compelled me to read more. Just the mere concept of Awakened powers can stoke the readers imagination and have an idea of the world outside the village. If… the story gets taken out of the village, which I hope will happen. Now, all that is needed is to introduce different cultures, meet new people and for the love of god not present everyone in the world as the same sex-driven society. Such a society just won’t be enjoyable to read no matter what. As for the characters themselves: all of them have quite the… distinct personalities. However, atleast they’re fleshed out enough to know who is who without having to name them. Though my greatest pet peeve is the authors frequent use of modern terms, like ‘plastic bucket’. I don’t know about the history of the world, but I certainly refuse to believe such a primitive society had developed something as complicated as ‘plastic’. Gotta find something else to use to describe the material of an item, xD. Another problem I have with it is the potential hypocritical nature of the MC and the state of men as a whole in this world. It was made increasingly apparent that men in this world is somewhat incapable…? Like they can only get it up after like 5-10 minutes of foreplay and last for less. Author describes all of them to be just terrible at sex, even the older generation based on how the older woman MC had sex with enjoyed their time with him… Uhh… hopefully its only in this village right?? Then there is the hypocritical nature of the MC. Or rather, the very much apparent one where he wants to have sex with other women but no man touches his women. While it is understandable, it’s just bad writing to expect him to satisfy and love all the women he had sex with and expect no one else to ’touch’ his ‘property’. Just 70 ch in and he already ‘enjoyed’ like 8 girls. Like cmon, be realistic. Anyway, good potential, hopefullly won’t degenerate into something unreadable after the reveal of his awakening.

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Village Head's Debauchery

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