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Review Detail of SlowGo in Saga of The Night God

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SlowGo
SlowGoLv1512mthSlowGo

I'm really enjoying this story morning it does have adult content but it doesn't Focus only on that there is a story behind it and there are other things going on author jumped through time a little bit at one point and it made it a bit hard to follow but since then it's been in chronological order which might just be a personal issue I have trouble following ones that jump around a lot so maybe that's my issue more than anyone else I think his character design is good but I think it could be better it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more in some places main character seems to be okay for the most part and some of the other characters he didn't spend enough time with so maybe that's part of the issue as well I think he'll be going back to them eventually the main character will see them again and maybe we'll get more information then but there's a lot of questions left which isn't a bad thing if you're trying to make things a mystery but it's something that frustrates me that's all the world seems interesting I'm hoping he's going to start learning more about the world cuz it seems like there's levels to the world and he's been put into a lower one now but I'm not sure on how that works yet hasn't been touched on very much I'm hoping now that he's at the school I know he's a Slave but I'm hoping he will learn more now that he has access to the library and so on I'm looking forward to the story continuing and while I wish it updated more it is very stable like it's pretty consistent with how much it updates so it's not a surprise when something comes out it's just it's a good story so I kind of wish more would come out sooner but I feel that way about pretty much every story I like so

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Saga of The Night God

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PsydeON
PsydeONLv13PsydeON

I'm begging you, please use punctuation when writing long paragraphs

Fire_imp
Fire_impLv14Fire_imp

I agree with the other guy about punctuation. But I also agree that the story is really poorly connected.