one of my favourite things available on this app is this fanfic. i definitely wouldn't have thought someone can write such a mesmerising realistic and beautiful ben 10 fanfic. and this just does it. this is realistic. set after he secrets of the Omnitrix it carries on that same note. even more so by the latest chapters. though i don't know if it's completed or not. i only read till 23.. I'm scared to read the last 2... what if it's not completed ? i don't like reading something that's been dropped so i give this review here in the hopes that it gets completed someday. and also. authors writing is very good though there were miss punctuations here and there it was more then fun to read it .
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LIKEDaoistPRjNvs:Yes it is completed but in my opinion it is a sour ending.It is not that it is not a happy ending but one where things are left unfinished.It is one heck of a great story do not get me wrong it is just me been to much into the story to just accept the kind of ending the author has opted for.
AzazelGrim:yeah. after reading the last two chapters I can understand your feelings .