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Review Detail of LaoTze in The Holy Maiden Uncovers My Coffin When I Just Become An Emperor's Corpse

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LaoTze
LaoTzeLv141yrLaoTze

MC reincarnated into 10,000 year old corpse of an emperor level cultivator as people are scheming to steal and refine his incredibly powerful body. He kills most using the only remnant he has of his previous cultivation -- his aura-- and takes one of them as his maid. His system, unprompted, continually gives him new cultivation techniques and improving his physique. He goes around killing people, to absorb their blood and cultivation to regain his emperor level cultivation, and gathering more slaves. The plot (14 chapters in) lacks any sense of threat: even though his cultivation level is low, his aura and body make him invincible. Also the system is continually making him more OP so there's no need for him to do anything. It's boring, the MC is arrogant, and it's jarring that he transmigrated and immediately forms a plan to kill people to absorb them and also casually enslaves people. There's no self reflection.

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The Holy Maiden Uncovers My Coffin When I Just Become An Emperor's Corpse

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D_Wolf
D_WolfLv1D_Wolf

I personally got confused reading the first couple of chapters and dropped it. Looking back I was probably skimming and needed to reread a couple of times to figure out what the actual progression of events was.

horrendous_potato
horrendous_potatoLv4horrendous_potato

I don't understand why most people think that there needs to be a sense of crisis or threat for a story to be good. slice of life novels don't have a sense of threat unless its for some senseless drama and people are fine with that. and to me this story is basically just slice of life.