I am giving 5 stars because I like the book at beginning but my review will be harsh. The book started of great but suddenly went downhill. Author tried to create mystery with character's background and names but overdid it. Too many words with Indian context will alienate most readers. I was looking forward to read Adi's adventure in University with two great female leads that author introduced but now it's dark which isn't making any sense that much early in the novel. Since author is very hardworking(posting chapters daily) and the concept is good, I advise him to start a new novel instead of continuing it and executing your idea better. The readers(collections and views) you are getting are too low. Just my two cents, don't have to take seriously.
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LIKEThanks, Indian_Rake for your review, By today evening, I'll be making immense changes and shifting the novel and creating another novel. I hope that you support me there. BTW high school story will continue after the Ruins expedition and also after the Kailash Trials. Keep supporting me. Thanks a lot.
zvery:Thanks, Indian_Rake for your review, By today evening, I'll be making immense changes and shifting the novel and creating another novel. I hope that you support me there. BTW high school story will continue after the Ruins expedition and also after the Kailash Trials. Keep supporting me. Thanks a lot.
Hey the novel has shifted to the title Blessed with the Strongest System. Please give it a read. Thank you. You can find it on my profile.
Lazy_Pen_Master:what happened to book