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The story is awesome as well as the plot. The author described things very clearly and i loved the why this story starts One recommendation to the author, i have seen you writing few words with the star mark (*) insted try by adding a first chapter for certain meaning of few world and then write the novel. because it's confusing for a reader of he/she reads a word with a star mark, and if he/she know the word it became frustrating Looking forward to next chapters 😊

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Noted!! Thanks for the advice.