The story has potential. Great character build. Set in a very diverse country too. The storyline is what makes this interesting. Also something unique and not that bland. I love overpowered MC's, soo this is my type. I hope you make it more fun. I would love to see some setbacks and stuff to make the mc more powerful. Keep on writing....
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