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I like it. It's really good. But I have this kind of pet peeve where people just speed the things. On the last few lines, I'll be honest, I'd probably write it so that while the character is walking to the room, he is also thinking. But that's my opinion. Overall, I love the story. Keep up the good work. 🙂

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Thanks a lot, I now at least know that someone's been reading it. Yeah I too thought that the recent chapter seemed a bit rushed. Sry for that and thanks for the review. It has already had me motivated. And keep following it, also add some chapter/paragraph comments, soo I'll have a basic idea about where I went wrong.

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