Review Detail of YAMRAAJ_021 in Villain: Destiny Transfer System

Hello reader's Im not shameless enough to claim that this book is good enough to be a top tier because this is the first time I started writing and English is not my native language. In starting I didn't understand the switching problem of POV and made the starting chapter a bit hard to read but slowly I gained some knowledge about writing and also taking advice from fellow authors. Anyways here are some things regarding the story:-• MC in starting is quite dumb and not ruthless but he will slowly become ruthless. *Spoiler* His personality will starting to change after he get to know why and by whom he was sent to this world.• For romance I'm taking it slow and doesn't want to get a brain dead Female Lead and so I'm slowly doing character development. Also I want to ask would you guys need me to write R18(Smut) scenes?•Alsp want to ask should MC have a huge harem or something like 3 Wife and 4 concubines.•I don't earn much from this book and I'm writing it to hone my skills for second and third novel which I'm preparing to write.•There will be some duplicate and repeated chapters so please skip them(Im genuinely sorry for that but I couldn't do anything about it.)|•| Alright guys if you have any questions regarding the story or anything you can ask me!