Review Detail of hde in An Otherworldly Magician [HP X Marvel]
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It's decent but the spacing between sentences is kinda weird from time to time and i just don't understand the whole red star thingy. Except for that its pretty decent but author pls stop saying the mc has an 8 pack over and over cause it's physically impossible for a child that's 11 to have that.
An Otherworldly Magician [HP X Marvel]
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His system allows him to earn stars by doing good deeds. The stars can be used to travel to different universes (harry potter, sorcerer’s apprentice, fairy tail, card captor later in story) while putting a time stop on the worlds he leave through the use of stars. The stars can also improve his comprehension allowing him to learn and unserstand magic faster. These two star usage options will become obsolete after the MC grows stronger the comprehension option will be the first to go. The system will upgrade after earning a certain amount of stars. This story is great so far and is still being updated in original language. In the latest chapters the MC is starting to deal with the Eath’s Celestial problem.