Review Detail of Hunter931 in Star Wars system in marvel

the question will you go past 5 chs

first one is better. and bring the store back.

To answer your question it did.

first one was much better I won't lie the second one is a pain to read it has things from the first one that fits well with how the first was going but now it's just confusion

I couldn't get past chapter 1 because of how unbearably mediocre the fanfic is.

1. Like all normal fanfics, the beginning is mediocre at best and the MC is kind of stupid. 2. Coulson has almost zero charisma and the mc says the first stupid thing that occurs to him like saying that he is human (the most useless or mediocre race at best in the mega multiverse of movies, anime, manga, others), but that can be forgiven because the MC is agitated by the "landing" and scared by the agents pointing their guns at him (the only one who can't be forgiven is the author for putting him on a crashing spaceship and making Coulson and the agents appear in less than 2 seconds).

update chapter bro