I was first captivated by it but it became the typical Chinese novel where after some days of the game a mysterious girl will come and if he doesn't take her as his sister she became his wife or subordinate. I was so happy about his talent but now I already have an idea about what's going to happen so will be dropping .
Spaceninja5789
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LIKEokay like am not yet deep in the chapters but I'll give another review cause of ur comment and I'll try to read it till the final chapter no matter how cringe and I hope no harem please
Spaceninja5789:Thanks for the review this was my first novel and I was kind of just following tropes for a while, unfortunately I can’t really go back and change that but if you have any good suggestions I’m happy to take them
Drogo20:okay like am not yet deep in the chapters but I'll give another review cause of ur comment and I'll try to read it till the final chapter no matter how cringe and I hope no harem please
I have only read about 50 chap but the Mc seens to be really wasting his talent, unless you put something that restricts him evolving there is no reason for him to use it as few times as he has on his subordinates
Spaceninja5789:Thanks for the review this was my first novel and I was kind of just following tropes for a while, unfortunately I can’t really go back and change that but if you have any good suggestions I’m happy to take them
Drogo20:okay like am not yet deep in the chapters but I'll give another review cause of ur comment and I'll try to read it till the final chapter no matter how cringe and I hope no harem please
Drogo20:okay like am not yet deep in the chapters but I'll give another review cause of ur comment and I'll try to read it till the final chapter no matter how cringe and I hope no harem please
u are stupid bro this comment was during its early days u fool it was when the author was just releasing
Santy_Melay:Are you an idiot or what, read the labels.