Review Detail of nathan_playzz in Reborn as Shido in Date a Live

Might be favouritism (very much so) but I just gotta support another writer that writes DAL fanfics as the number of good DAL fanfics can be counted on one hand! Now onto the actual reveiw! The grammer is great (a lot better than mine) The inclusion of the system fits in well, but I would like to complain about some plotholes with Mio, as she would be able to sense these things happening (as Shido is not able to use the full power of any spirit he seals he can only use like 50-80%) Overall I rate this 5/5 because it is a DAL fanfic