Review Detail of AshW0If in I Am The Game's Villain

I Kinda have a love-hate relationship with this novel. On the one hand, the word building is great, writing quality above average for this app, and some characters are amazingly written, while on the other hand, the author put so many twists into the story that it is mind boggling I mean [Spolier]- The dude that kills the Mc's family is first reincarnated as Edward kills everybody then he somehow travels in time with op abilities and kills best girl ( not really kills her but still ) there was no foreshadowing or anything just this is the plot now and another thing that I just can't really take in is the fact that he knows that the system master is manipulating him, watching him and altering his memories yet he does nothing about it just says thank you like wtf !. Writing 9/10 Story Development 3/10 ( To many things happen with no foreshadowing, and no warning just fells forced [ to me]) Character Design 7/10 ( Some characters are great and have amazing development while others are just forgotten and altered [Take The Half elf as the example, for 70 chapters, nothing on her yet out of the blue and for no good reason (except a kiss) she says she is another reincarnate and she was violated in her world so she is NOW JOINING ANTY-EDIN like wtf why butcher a character] Update stability 1/10 ( No comment) World Backround 10/10.