Review Detail of Blank_paper in I Am The Game's Villain

i read it and all ii ill say is the author is certainly new i guess in writing, the story started off nicely but developed into some kind of to be dark themed novel which was not meant to be so developed like that. dark themed novel need to be wrote a little differently but anyways. The lore is too much to take in and someway along the line you will start to feel pissed and think "was it really necessary here?". The mc character development is somewhat forced i guess imo where many deaths were not needed , its not always have be a death to grow in character. Many deaths in the story will feel bland and unnecessary. The different world connecting drama and all the timeline things made it even more complex ( like i said , unnecessary and forced lore).I just hope author learns from this novel and write a far good one in future. PS: To me it can be said the novel tried to get in the general trend of reincarnating as a villain thing but in process of trying to differentiate itself from others it lost its own charm and became a mess