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Review Detail of dfektz in I Am The Game's Villain

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I am writing this at the point in which I plan to stop reading the book. I will include spoilers in the review so don't read further if you want to go into the story without knowledge.The story starts of alright, the premise going into the main part of the story is a bit of the red flag and sets the groundwork for the main character being an obsessed emo protagonist pursuing his tragically dead love from earth.The author starts off the story and background on a strong note and the motivations of the protagonist (villain) seem alright to start, not good and really logical but not outright terrible as long as he is adaptable. From the early part of the story it goes downhill from there, the author makes the cast of characters and interrelationships extremely convoluted and the obsessed emo mc gets worse from the starting point, he doesn't seem to learn or grow and due to the speed and frequency that potential female leads are introduced it is hard to tell who we should get attached to, if anyone, due to the lack of development and meaningful interactions there are.As others point out, the MC is obsessed about being the ultimate wingman for one of the story's original MCs (because according to the world building there will be three).It isn't until the MC is ditched by the guy he has been attempting to help the entire time and almost gets the MC and his sister killed does he drop this mindset and plans to try and manipulate him to his cause. (Though if I had to predict what will happen going forward is that this will repeat itself for the other two Main Characters.The other issue I have run into (as of the last chapter released before privilege) is that one of the female leads who has been characterized as sweet and innocent is now randomly off and confessing to the MC despite not loving him? The sudden backtracking on that relationship is just confusing and comes off as bad.Overall, and to be blunt, the MC comes off as pathetic, stupid, and a shonen protagonist that is as dense as the great wall.I haven't felt like I have gotten any "payoff" as a reader so all of the story is just depressing as it is either the main character getting his ass kicked left and right, failing at his task, or simply failing to be a better character.

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