Review Detail of Jerman_R in Dropped sorry :(

Sorry, but it was my first novel that I started writing without thinking about any plot that's why I had to drop it, I am writing a new novel, the world is the same but I have shuffled the story a bit to make it more interesting, I hope you support me like you did on this one and I promise I will write a long story this time without dropping and also thanks for the support :) Search for my new novel and gift me some power stones if you like it