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Review Detail of ArogantYoungMaster in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Had potential, but was ruined by poor writing. The MCs character in this novel doesn't develop at all, but it gets worse and worse with time. And by the time he enters the academy he becomes a disgusting simp. The mc began as an extremely likeable and decisive person, and the author portrayed him as someone who would never show mercy on his enemies regardless of his gender. But as time passes MC's, mc loses all of his decisive attitude, and how he treats his enemies depends entirely on enemy's gender. As long as the enemy is a boy, the mc would torture, humiliate or even kill them without batting an eye. But as long as the enemy is a girl, it doesn't matter even if they tried to literally kill mc, the mc would go easy on them and not kill them. The author keeps coming up with trash and senseless excuses fpr sparing those hoes but those excuses seem to disappear as long as the mc is a male. Now the mc is nothing but a disgusting simp In the beginning mc made many promises like how "he'll destroy his fiance Alicia and her family". blah blah blah. But like a dog that only bark and doesn't bite the mc never really did anything against her. That bitch of a fiance, Alicia keeps plotting and spreading rumours against mc and repeatedly tried to harm him again, and it is also HER who cheated and manipulated him in the beginning, but the mc didn't even touch her. Instead of simp of a loser mc sets his sight on the "protagonist " who hasn't even interacted with mc much in his entire life lol, MC beats the protagonist, humiliated him and does everything he can to break him but he seems to have completely forgotten about that bitch Alicia. And now comes his disgusting sister, she bullies mc her entire life and even joined hands with MC's fiance to plot against him. The mc also vowed to make her regret but now when he finally had the opportunity, the mc suddenly started coming up with excuses for her crime like how she bullies the mc because she was neglected by her father blah blah blah. And he also mentions how he is impressed with her. The mc again, would gladly torture the protagonist, who only interacted with him once or twice, but goes easy on his sister who tortured him his whole life. And now author seems to introducing a shitty redemption arc for her lol. This wouldn't happen if she was a male, the simp mc spared her only because of her gender. Nothing more. The author might try to cover this simp mc by his senseless excuses but we all know what the real reason is. This novel is mid at best. Starts good, but gets disgusting as it progresses.

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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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