Review Detail of Crimson_Joy in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Ok This is my honest Review So far (On chapter 100) , This is my Point of view , I'm liking the story and everything but there are a few problem 1st At the start of the story you said "albeit" To many times it was getting annoying seeing that word , 2nd You didn't show other point of views Much but you have changed that now which is good in my eyes (example You showed Aliya's point of view at some point) And the other points I don't see much so everything is fine (in my eyes) This is the 2nd story I'm enjoying here , Still think you could have done a better job at the start because it was boring there but I see improvements