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Review Detail of Darkness_Enjoyer in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthor8mthDarkness_Enjoyer

Hello! Honest review from the Author. -->Grammar (4/5) There are a lot of mistakes to point out in my grammar. Be it using idioms wrong places or using the same words over and over again. This is rather related to the fact that I don't have much time to write my novel and proofread it thanks to the college I am attending. ( I spend 40 minutes on each chapter only.) I don't believe that my grammar is so poor that it renders my book unreadable. I believe that I have maintained a sufficient level of grammar to make it readable. --> Updates (5/5) There is nothing much to say. Unless something extreme happens like an exam that takes 4 hours straight, I post two chapters every day. --> Story development (4/5) The pacing of my novel may not be to everyone's taste, as it includes a lot of monologues from the main character and occasional POV changes. This can result in a slower pace than some readers may anticipate. However, I believe it still has value and encourages readers to give it a chance. In my opinion, the story isn't terrible and it doesn't necessarily make one feel bored. However, it may not be the most captivating read available. -->Character Design (4/5) I believe that my portrayal of the main cast in the game was inadequate and poorly executed, resulting in a loss of one point. Nonetheless, I also believe that the other characters possess unique qualities that differentiate them from one another. --> World Background (5/5) I believe I have created a well-crafted world with a rich background, incorporating diverse elements. However, I understand that some readers may find it ambitious. One of the strongest aspects of my novel is its foundation, particularly the well-executed RPG elements. --> Romance (4/5) Although not subject to star ratings, it is imperative to address the aspect of my portrayal of female characters in the game. I take great pride in avoiding the common trope of presenting them as mere sexual objects for the main character. These females are strong and independent, playing pivotal roles in shaping the narrative. They are integral parts of the story, not just decorative accessories. Despite having had several relationships, I have never experienced the feeling of falling in love with another person thus far. Therefore, this part may be a bit dull, and I can't do much about it since it basically stems from my personality. Hope this review helps.

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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Great_Akshit_8853
Great_Akshit_8853Lv13Great_Akshit_8853

Hey Author, discord link got expired, can you post the latest one from the server, thanks

Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthorDarkness_Enjoyer

K.

Great_Akshit_8853:Hey Author, discord link got expired, can you post the latest one from the server, thanks
Rionn
RionnLv15Rionn

No NTR, right?

Darkness_Enjoyer:K.
Manmeet_Singh_8886
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv13Manmeet_Singh_8886

Nope. Atleast i haven't seen any till latest chapter. Though I would say not every beautiful woman would fall for mc and some would rather annoy due to their ignorance and underestimating mc

Rionn:No NTR, right?
Its_Your_Boi
Its_Your_BoiLv3Its_Your_Boi

really need to create an auxilery page that breaks down the power / status scaling pls 👌🏼

Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4Uncertainty

What is the moral alignment of mc?

Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthorDarkness_Enjoyer

Neutral-Evil.

Uncertainty:What is the moral alignment of mc?
Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4Uncertainty

Really, at chapter 62 mc helps a person (“dogs”) by telling them that a dungeon with valuable resources would open next month on the 21st. How is he evil?

Darkness_Enjoyer:Neutral-Evil.
Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4Uncertainty

Mc then proceeds to say, a person who would beat a person who tried to rob him to get money for his sibling is evil. Can you actually tell me whether mc is evil/villain? If he isn’t an evil/villainous mc why include ’villain’ tag?

Uncertainty:Really, at chapter 62 mc helps a person (“dogs”) by telling them that a dungeon with valuable resources would open next month on the 21st. How is he evil?
Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_EnjoyerAuthorDarkness_Enjoyer

Bow that I think about it, you are right. 'Neutral' would be a lot better.

Uncertainty:Really, at chapter 62 mc helps a person (“dogs”) by telling them that a dungeon with valuable resources would open next month on the 21st. How is he evil?
Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15Sinful_Cyanide

Is there any yuri in this novel?

Darkness_Enjoyer:Bow that I think about it, you are right. 'Neutral' would be a lot better.