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Review Detail of Cupio in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Cupio
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So I read up to when the free chapters end. So chapter 29. The writer spends most of the chapters explaining stuff over and over. The writer is also too wordy, instead of just saying something simple like "the mc experimented and learned how to use magic the first time while trying stuff from his old life." He uses a bunch of paragraphs to do it. Is he padding chapters? Learning how to write? I do want to say that I understand at the beginning of a story you have to introduce the world. It just went on all the free chapters. Do it quicker. It is not a story I will be continuing. It started to feel like a chore to read, so just not to my taste. Hopefully, the writer will improve later on. A side note, I'm new to the story and there are already over 100 chapters. I don't know the stability of updates. So 4 stars for that.

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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Welcome to webnovel!!!!!!!and you literally just explained almost every novel here.What I would like to know is any can justify paying to read it🤔🤷

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THCCULTIVATOR:Welcome to webnovel!!!!!!!and you literally just explained almost every novel here.What I would like to know is any can justify paying to read it🤔🤷