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I don't plan to insult or offend anyone :) The plot has a good start (chapter 1 to 5). Then it gets boring and stupid the further you go, I go from an interesting concept to something boring and monotonous. The characters feel hyper stupid as if they were NPCs instead of people, and of course since everyone feels stupid the mc will seem "intelligent" but he only does and points out obese and normal things. The system or ia is there, without a sense of existence, it could easily be a screen without communication and it would have the same effect.

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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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Its a world where strength matters most not intelligence or money. For example if adalyn wants to bully mc just because she’ jealous of his mother she can because she’ s stronger and same with his sister. They are not gonna think the same way as u because they haven’t been raised the same way.

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lolbingolol:Its a world where strength matters most not intelligence or money. For example if adalyn wants to bully mc just because she’ jealous of his mother she can because she’ s stronger and same with his sister. They are not gonna think the same way as u because they haven’t been raised the same way.
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They are in a world where strength matters most so they are gonna be more stupid and think differently than u. Whilst we’re in school all day they are training to become stronger all day.

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ohh now i get what you're trying to say but the mc doesn't do anything that can be called smart, witty, he basically does everything on impulse without thinking about its consequence. And for your information in that world there are politics, and merchant houses, so the stupid ones would have no way to progress, and since many others are basically nobles or sons of businessmen.... ps: As you said, it is a world where the strong have the word, if that is the case, the weak must be more intelligent to be able to have the support of the strong and must also be intelligent so as not to accidentally provoke someone strong. Returning to the issue of businessmen, someone weak can hire someone strong or buy a strong slave to protect them or do things for them, so we return to the topic, no stupid person can develop in the world. SORRY IF I DID NOT UNDERSTAND YOU BEFORE I SPEAK SPANISH NOT ENGLISH AND THE TRANSLATION CONFUSED ME.

lolbingolol:They are in a world where strength matters most so they are gonna be more stupid and think differently than u. Whilst we’re in school all day they are training to become stronger all day.
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True but if u look at the mc who is weak but with a strong background, he has pretty much everyone against him even the maids don’t respect him. Also ye mc is not very smart but he’s done the best he could have done in a situation where everyone is against him.

Salmon_El_Solomon:ohh now i get what you're trying to say but the mc doesn't do anything that can be called smart, witty, he basically does everything on impulse without thinking about its consequence. And for your information in that world there are politics, and merchant houses, so the stupid ones would have no way to progress, and since many others are basically nobles or sons of businessmen.... ps: As you said, it is a world where the strong have the word, if that is the case, the weak must be more intelligent to be able to have the support of the strong and must also be intelligent so as not to accidentally provoke someone strong. Returning to the issue of businessmen, someone weak can hire someone strong or buy a strong slave to protect them or do things for them, so we return to the topic, no stupid person can develop in the world. SORRY IF I DID NOT UNDERSTAND YOU BEFORE I SPEAK SPANISH NOT ENGLISH AND THE TRANSLATION CONFUSED ME.
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Also the things he does by impulse is what he can’t control because of his traits. He has a lot of pride and can’t ignore somethings. other than that he’s done fine or u could say maybe he could’ve gotten close to Emma or adalyn but that would never work unless he’s stronger than them.

Salmon_El_Solomon:ohh now i get what you're trying to say but the mc doesn't do anything that can be called smart, witty, he basically does everything on impulse without thinking about its consequence. And for your information in that world there are politics, and merchant houses, so the stupid ones would have no way to progress, and since many others are basically nobles or sons of businessmen.... ps: As you said, it is a world where the strong have the word, if that is the case, the weak must be more intelligent to be able to have the support of the strong and must also be intelligent so as not to accidentally provoke someone strong. Returning to the issue of businessmen, someone weak can hire someone strong or buy a strong slave to protect them or do things for them, so we return to the topic, no stupid person can develop in the world. SORRY IF I DID NOT UNDERSTAND YOU BEFORE I SPEAK SPANISH NOT ENGLISH AND THE TRANSLATION CONFUSED ME.