Review Detail of Spelloyal in RE: Monkey Queen Dan Machi

The story is interesting, the mc is very interesting and really seems like Sun Wukongem in terms of personality, however as should be obvious just by reading the synopsis, the grammar is terrible. The world background isn't bad, but I didn't like it since it's apparently a big danmachi AU where the MC went to fix a world that another reincarnator screwed up. The author doesn't think much about geography either, declaring that a city within the desert is three days' walk from Orario. In conclusion, it's an interesting fic with potential to be really good, but some very big problems put in doubt if this potential will be explored.