Review Detail of RENSHU in DxD: Golden Peerage

The writing quality is amazing by web novel standards. Though the storytelling could further improve if it were written in the third person POV. The MC is far too strong in the DXD world which renders the build-up and suspense stale. It could've been a good slice-of-life type of story, but ruined by the author's overt enthusiasm. If you thought DXD women were already too many, the author introduces more OCs and crossovers characters. It is ambitious on the author's part. However, it falls short due to speed-running the build-up of relationships. All I have read is that almost every woman the MC meet is thirsting for him. Whilst understandable since strength attracts, because of the MCs laid back easy personality relationships felt shallow, and currently 145 chapters in it get harder to read. Conclusion of "MY" opinion; High-quality grammar, storytelling could have been better, too many characters, no build-up of romance(except for maybe Grayfia), predictable events, confusing world background(the original world of the MC), good character design for the MC but most of the women are left to be desired("bland" if I would've been more direct). It has potential but with the current state of the story, it has been boring. Finally, what I like about the author is that he is a God updating three stories! what a mad lad. Everything is of my opinion and I hope I have not offended somebody. Author, you may correct me if I might have misinterpreted.