Review Detail of Nicolas_Bahamondes in DxD: Golden Peerage

well it's not bad but it still has a long way to go to be perfect: the main character is very lame he jumped from soldier to idiot follower of gods and the plot is very slow seriously you can skip the whole prologue and there's no difference. He has good writing, he puts effort into the dialogues and the interactions and the Chinese stuff works very well for him. I advise you to make a fic from a Chinese novel reincarnating as the main character or the bad guy, I'm sure you would do very well.