I read through chapter 7. I like the story. The story has a bit of comedy that I enjoyed. I thought the writing was decent, but the biggest issue is probably the expressions and dialogue. The story has good enough fluid, but it's fast-paced and ambiguous. I thought the MC was whatever. The MC is your stereotypical transmigrator who thinks the world revolves around them. But I thought it was cool to include ravens as it adds uniqueness to the story. I also liked the MC's power not included as a mutant. Overall, I'll rate this at a 3/5.
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